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Edited by redrebelz at 2018-10-20 01:15

The Story,

Once upon a time there live a young woman in the little village near the forest. The young woman name's Roro. Roro is arrogant with all people in the village, One day someone is appear from the forest and he looks so dying looking for someone to help him. He walking arround the village but no one help him. One day He's meet roro, and asking roro for help. Roro is arrogant young woman, but though she's arrogant, she help the dying man. She give the dying man , drink , food and the dying man feel healty again. Roro feel happy with that, but she dont know if the dying man is a witch , yea he is a Worst witch which is  live in the forest. The witch is healty and for the revenge of people live in the village, He Curse Roro. He turned Roro to Beast and kill all the people lived in the village , no one survive except roro and the witch. After the revenge was done, the witch turn back roro to young woman again, and the witch is gone walking inside to the forest. Roro was alone because all of peopleis die because her, she is mad and burn the forest. In the morning after the forest burn she is got nothing except an ash. she not found the dead body from witch. she crying until the tear become a blood, after that the witch come again, and ask to the Roro "This is the curse for your Arrogant  Character". All people hate you so i turned you to wipe out the people in the village to make you know if you need them too.
After saying that , the witch turned roro again to beast to protect other forest which is the witch live inside that. We can also know the beast name is the  FORESTKEEPER.




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A lot of the grammatical errors take away from the story. I understand that English may not be your native language so I do appreciate your effort . If you would like assistance re-writing the story I can help you with this. Nevertheless, thank you for your submission.
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